Professional emails.
At work, people judge you by your emails long before they know your skills. A clear email gets quick replies; a confusing one gets ignored. Today you'll learn a simple formula and templates for the emails you'll write most.
The 5-part formula
- Subject: specific ("Leave request – 14 Nov").
- Greeting: "Hi Sana," / "Dear Mr. Rao,".
- Purpose first: one line saying why you're writing.
- Details: short paragraphs or bullet points.
- Action + closing: what you need, by when; "Regards," + your name.
Formal vs friendly
| More formal | More friendly |
|---|---|
| Dear Mr. Rao, | Hi Rahul, |
| I am writing to request… | Could you please… |
| Please find attached… | I've attached… |
| I look forward to your reply. | Thanks! Let me know. |
| Yours sincerely, | Regards, / Best, |
Use formal for new clients, senior people and official matters; friendly for your team.
Templates
Request:
Subject: Access to the CRM dashboard
Hi Rahul,
Could you please give me access to the CRM dashboard? I need it to prepare
the weekly sales report due on Friday.
Thanks in advance,
Ayesha
Follow-up (polite reminder):
Subject: Re: Invoice #2041
Hi Mr. Khan,
Just following up on my email from Monday about invoice #2041.
Could you let me know when the payment is expected?
Regards,
Ali Raza
Apology:
Subject: Correction – October report
Hi Sana,
I'm sorry, the October report I shared had an error in the total on page 2.
I've attached the corrected version. I've also added a check to prevent this
in future reports.
Regards,
Ayesha
A good apology email is short: say sorry once, fix the problem, and explain how you'll prevent it. No long excuses.
Which first line is best?
Purpose first. One polite greeting line is fine, but don't make readers hunt for the point.
Rewrite: "Dear Mr. Reddy, my October salary hasn't been credited yet. Could you please check and let me know the expected date? Thank you."
Clear and complete.
What should almost every work email end with?
Clear next steps get faster replies.
Day 36–39 task
Write 4 emails using the templates: a request, an update, a follow-up and an apology. Use your own realistic situations. Read each aloud: could the reader act on it in 30 seconds?
Lesson 10 complete!
You can write clear, polite emails for requests, updates, follow-ups and apologies. Next: WhatsApp and Slack at work.
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